While watching the video game kickstarter videos, I think the Underworld Ascendant game is better compaired to the Shadowstar Corsirs board game. Even though these two are different types of games, I would say the Underworld video by OtherSide Entertainment presented their kickstarter in a better fashion. When I was watchin Underworld Ascendant, they talk about their previous games and what they want to do with this game. They had different people talk about their game and had a sort of music background going on while the video is running. They make their game sound like something that would be worth investing in.
The second games is Shadowstar Corsairs and I found it not as appealing as the other game. When I was watching the video, I was not impressed as to what they were starting. The video had some animations, but I felt that it was boring. The speaker had a monotone way of speaking and it did not grab my attention. If I had to give an advise, I would say to present the game with more enthusiasm. They should improve on their ability to convince the audience that their product is worth investing in.
by Ryan Wolfe
The second area I choose was Technology between two different cameras. The first one is the GoPro and the other one is a Cycling Accessory. I think they are both pretty good ideas, but I felt that the GoPro was more convincing in presenting their product. They both give good examples throughout their video advertising their product, but I felt that the person who is presenting the GoPro did a better job. The person in the GoPro video was very energetic and outgoing when she was trying to present her camera.
Unlike the Cycling Accessory presenter where they would talk in a normal voice. It did not sound like they were excited or happy. They way they talked just seemed normal. They did not try to give a smile or anything compared to the first video. I believe the best way to convince others is to present yourself as someone who looks convincing…if that makes any sense… Well anyways, I would invest in GoPro because their video gave a happier mood.